10 thoughts on “Sohbet – Late Night Street Sweeper”
home isn’t quite home
til I’ve walked home
from downtown
Saturday night
touring my cousin
claiming the roadway
on the beltline street
with the best arching willows
entirely blessed
following his long legs
over the unexpected fence
of construction between us
and the freight tracks
crossing the river
beneath the freeway
watching that memorized last bus
go past
just a few blocks from home
is more home with
my first guest on the futons
in a hodgepodge of sheets
the blanket his mom wove me
doubling wonder
calf deep fresh april snow
wet enough to build a fort with
white and round on the branches
on the grasses
overhanging the icicles
thicker than cream
unseen above our heads
LoveloveLOVE this poem jyanti! Feels like I was right there with you. For whatever reason, futon guests is what caught in my brain. Here’s my reply:
A space reclaimed from broken hearts.
Fold-out futon of my own.
A place once full of clutter
…and harsh words.
Now has room
for small child sleepovers.
Solace in crisis.
Kitten-piled movie nights.
Sweaty entanglements.
Long talks in the dark with far away friends
…and strangers-come-friends.
A whole life lived out on a fold-out futon
in a place now my own.
It’s 3:00am
A different city …heck a different hemisphere!
So far from home and yet I remain my old sleepless self
Carrying whatever ails me all the way to Buenos Aires
What made me think I could leave it behind?
The ghost of past travels of course…
and the realization that when I’m in motion I’m not terrified
So right now I need to be on the move
I’ll look at the pain another day
Right now it’s too thick, too suffocating
Right now I need to stop this city from closing in on me
And find a little relief
Give myself the reprieve I came all this way for
Give my soul something easy to feel good about
Like being on a bus to Bolivia!
Outrunning the terror that pervades me to the core …for just a while
Wow Darren, this too blows me away. (such great poems on this stream, I’m floored!)
Very powerful, very REAL …for lack of a better word.
It calls to mind what seems to be my go-to song these days. I think it’s meant to be a break up song, but to my mind it feels like a song for that time when everything falls apart – the necessary annihilation before a new beginning. Hits me in the guts every time.
James Murdoch’s Break Me Down
Don’t know if you can load youtube stuff in S America, but I’m sending that feeling, that ache, that courage, all the same.
my demons come
my demons go
the boomerang bend
the freedom of flight
of a gull’s wings
my me demons
sea not required
I’ve never been to any land
forlorn of gulls
I’ve never run out
of footsteps
rocking me
on firmament
walk
breathe
I also ask myself “What makes me think I can leave it all behind?” One year I kept reading books about disappearing and I kept asking myself “What if…” Only to realize that I was the one who needed “to give myself reprieve and give my soul something easy to feel good about”.
poetic response:
Like Alice searching through the Looking Glass
at another world
wondering what it’s like in that other place
dreaming of new experiences
new people to meet
only to discover that the mirror
is reflecting what is behind me
is reflecting me
in my own world
full of those new experiences
and new people
and undiscovered parts of myself
surrender to
the terror of the not knowing
ease into the space of fear
it’s evidence that
I am alive
embrace the courage
that lies deep
in curiosity
be the child
that explores
without agenda
only for the pleasure
of exploring
I think you’re the Darren I know. I think you can guess who I am. (Shh, it’s a paranoid internet secret.) Anyway, I started writing mostly to say, you’re not alone in your baggage. (And wow, Buenos Aires!! Bolivia!! Have you read Eduardo Galeano?)
I am! And I did guess who you are, thanks for the hint! And no I haven’t read Eddie’s work. I’ll be sure to Google him though. I’m not paranoid …but perhaps I should be?
Here’s a follow up to my lament …it was right after a Tango class:
Terror
It pervades my core
manifests in the form of fear and anxiety
An elephant sitting on my chest
Very little moves it
Travel is one thing
Touch is another
Tonight, I touched
A tango lesson
A dance embrace
Nothing intimate
Yet passion ignites
I feel connected again
Part of the dance, so to speak
I am so utterly baffled
By the workings of my heart
late night.
feeling empty
and full at the same time.
sleepless
and tired at the same time.
ears pick up every swish
every drip drop
every scurry.
feeling every dip,
every bump,
every tightening and loosening…
home isn’t quite home
til I’ve walked home
from downtown
Saturday night
touring my cousin
claiming the roadway
on the beltline street
with the best arching willows
entirely blessed
following his long legs
over the unexpected fence
of construction between us
and the freight tracks
crossing the river
beneath the freeway
watching that memorized last bus
go past
just a few blocks from home
is more home with
my first guest on the futons
in a hodgepodge of sheets
the blanket his mom wove me
doubling wonder
calf deep fresh april snow
wet enough to build a fort with
white and round on the branches
on the grasses
overhanging the icicles
thicker than cream
unseen above our heads
by jyanti
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LoveloveLOVE this poem jyanti! Feels like I was right there with you. For whatever reason, futon guests is what caught in my brain. Here’s my reply:
A space reclaimed from broken hearts.
Fold-out futon of my own.
A place once full of clutter
…and harsh words.
Now has room
for small child sleepovers.
Solace in crisis.
Kitten-piled movie nights.
Sweaty entanglements.
Long talks in the dark with far away friends
…and strangers-come-friends.
A whole life lived out on a fold-out futon
in a place now my own.
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entirely blessed
with snow thicker than cream
such delightful quiet
like a Saturday morning
curled up in my warm nest
of fuzzy sheets
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It’s 3:00am
A different city …heck a different hemisphere!
So far from home and yet I remain my old sleepless self
Carrying whatever ails me all the way to Buenos Aires
What made me think I could leave it behind?
The ghost of past travels of course…
and the realization that when I’m in motion I’m not terrified
So right now I need to be on the move
I’ll look at the pain another day
Right now it’s too thick, too suffocating
Right now I need to stop this city from closing in on me
And find a little relief
Give myself the reprieve I came all this way for
Give my soul something easy to feel good about
Like being on a bus to Bolivia!
Outrunning the terror that pervades me to the core …for just a while
LikeLike
Wow Darren, this too blows me away. (such great poems on this stream, I’m floored!)
Very powerful, very REAL …for lack of a better word.
It calls to mind what seems to be my go-to song these days. I think it’s meant to be a break up song, but to my mind it feels like a song for that time when everything falls apart – the necessary annihilation before a new beginning. Hits me in the guts every time.
James Murdoch’s Break Me Down
Don’t know if you can load youtube stuff in S America, but I’m sending that feeling, that ache, that courage, all the same.
Much love,
v.
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my demons come
my demons go
the boomerang bend
the freedom of flight
of a gull’s wings
my me demons
sea not required
I’ve never been to any land
forlorn of gulls
I’ve never run out
of footsteps
rocking me
on firmament
walk
breathe
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Your words spoke across the miles to me. Thanks
I also ask myself “What makes me think I can leave it all behind?” One year I kept reading books about disappearing and I kept asking myself “What if…” Only to realize that I was the one who needed “to give myself reprieve and give my soul something easy to feel good about”.
poetic response:
Like Alice searching through the Looking Glass
at another world
wondering what it’s like in that other place
dreaming of new experiences
new people to meet
only to discover that the mirror
is reflecting what is behind me
is reflecting me
in my own world
full of those new experiences
and new people
and undiscovered parts of myself
surrender to
the terror of the not knowing
ease into the space of fear
it’s evidence that
I am alive
embrace the courage
that lies deep
in curiosity
be the child
that explores
without agenda
only for the pleasure
of exploring
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hey Darren,
I think you’re the Darren I know. I think you can guess who I am. (Shh, it’s a paranoid internet secret.) Anyway, I started writing mostly to say, you’re not alone in your baggage. (And wow, Buenos Aires!! Bolivia!! Have you read Eduardo Galeano?)
xo jyanti
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I am! And I did guess who you are, thanks for the hint! And no I haven’t read Eddie’s work. I’ll be sure to Google him though. I’m not paranoid …but perhaps I should be?
Here’s a follow up to my lament …it was right after a Tango class:
Terror
It pervades my core
manifests in the form of fear and anxiety
An elephant sitting on my chest
Very little moves it
Travel is one thing
Touch is another
Tonight, I touched
A tango lesson
A dance embrace
Nothing intimate
Yet passion ignites
I feel connected again
Part of the dance, so to speak
I am so utterly baffled
By the workings of my heart
LikeLike
late night.
feeling empty
and full at the same time.
sleepless
and tired at the same time.
ears pick up every swish
every drip drop
every scurry.
feeling every dip,
every bump,
every tightening and loosening…
that’s it!
Too many sensations
to experience
going back to my breath
in
out
in
out
…..
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